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=Steroids Blog Entry= [|Steroids Blog] March 4, 2008 by Jiyoon Kim

=Reflection: = = = In the class, we read about the steroids in the text book. In the book, they didn't explained the steroids lot. After that, we started the researching about the steroids. I went through some other websites and got basic informations. While I was researching the steroids, I find the facts I didn't know before. When I see the users in the United States, I was astonished about it! There are so many users in the United States, also lots of them were the teenagers. The most of teenagers are involved in the sports team, and they used it for their body. Actually, it is not really legal to use it to the sports players, but they are using it. The number of teenagers are so much than what I thought. Using the steroids are not good for their health, and it brings the several bad results to the human body. The users should stop for their health, but most of them wouldn't realize how bad that is.

When Mr. Orr explained the way to write the blog, I think I didn't understand well enough. On my blog entry, I miss lots of points that he wanted me to writed in the blog entry. This blog is the my worst blog entry for whole year. I didn't get to the point that Mr. Orr wants. I was just wrote how bad it is and the results mostly, and the number of users. But Mr. Orr wants me to wrote why steroids is bad and effects to the people. I should work more harder when I wrote my blog. And if I tried to concentrated on the track, I should got better grade than what I got. I am so regret about this blog entry.